Science Writing workshop

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To register, contact Karen Broderick
karen.broderick@yale.edu 432-3837

January 30 and February 6, 2012
Instructor: Carl Zimmer
Email: carl@carlzimmer.com


Meeting Place: Peabody Museum Auditorium, 170 Whitney Avenue

Workshop objectives: This workshop will introduce science graduate students to writing about science for a broad, non-scientist audience.

Course schedule:

First meeting: Monday January 30, 2012, 10 am to noon.
This session will begin with a discussion about science writing, considering techniques required for good science writing. We will use the assigned reading below as the basis for the discussion. The books are available on reserve. You might want to consider purchasing both of them; they are excellent introductions to science writing.

I will describe in some detail how I produced one of my own articles, starting with the paper on which it was based.

Finally, we will discuss the course assignment (details below). We will discuss the papers about which you will be writing, and begin to plan out your pieces. So please prepare for the discussion by reading the papers.


TECHNIQUE:
From A Field Guide for Science Writers

(Amazon page)
17. Deadline Writing, by Gareth Cook. (p.111)
19. Gee Whiz Science Writing, by Robert Kunzig (p.126)
22. The Science Essay, Robert Kanigel (p.145)

Questions to consider: These three writers describe three very different forms of science writing: short newspaper articles, long magazine features, and essays. What techniques are common to all three forms? What are the most important differences? Do you think that these differences are a matter of convention or reflect the essential rules of each genre? How do these techniques impair or strengthen articles about science? Do any of these techniques apply to other kinds of science communications, such as television or blogs?


EXAMPLES OF SCIENCE WRITING

From The Best American Science Writing, 2011 (Ecco) Link

“BP’s Deep Secrets,” by Julia Whitty (p.82) Link

“A Soft Spot for Circuitry,” by Amy Harmon (p. 146) Link

“A Deadly Misdiagnosis,” by Michael Specter (p.241) Link


FROM PAPER TO ARTICLE:

The paper: Mora C, Tittensor DP, Adl S, Simpson AGB, Worm B (2011) How Many Species Are There on Earth and in the Ocean? PLoS Biol 9(8): e1001127. doi:10.1371/journal.pbio.1001127 Link

The article: “How Many Species Are There?” By Carl Zimmer. The New York Times, August 8, 2011. Link

Questions to consider: I will give a brief account of writing a news article based on a new paper estimating global biodiversity. Look at the paper and the story. What similarities in structure do you see? What is in the story that was not in the paper? What elements in the story are intended for a wide audience, as opposed to the narrower audience for the paper? How does the story balance different views on the research?


Writing Assignment:

Write a 600-word explanation of this paper:
Kanai, R., Bahrami, B., Roylance, R., & Rees, G. (2011). Online social network size is reflected in human brain structure Proceedings of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences DOI: 10.1098/rspb.2011.1959 Link

You are free to choose the style in which you write your assignment. It may be an opinion piece, a piece of straight news reporting as you'd see in a newspaper, or a more creative piece you might find in a magazine. However you approach it, you must explain the paper—why the scientists did the research, how they did it, and what they learned from it—in such a way that a lay reader can understand it (and perhaps even enjoy it). The first step towards good writing is good language. So avoid all jargon, no matter how tempting. See here for an index of words I’ve banned from previous classes.

To research your piece, read the paper, look for any commentaries in the journals, and find background reading for context. If necessary, try to find someone at Yale or elsewhere who is an expert in this area who can take you through the research.

Assignments are due by Thursday, Feburary 2, 2011 at 5 pm. Please email them to me at carl@carlzimmer.com

Please note that I will only be able to evaluate pieces by the first 20 students who registered for the workshop. However, all registrants are welcome to attend both sessions, write the assignment, and participate in the discussions about the assignment in the second session. In order to participate in the second session, waiting list students will need to read the writing assignments I distribute for discussion, and write comments.
On Friday, February 3, I will send all workshop students 2 pieces. All students will be expected to read them by the second workshop meeting and be prepared to discuss them.


Second Meeting: Monday, February 6, 2012, 10 am to noon.

We will spend this session discussing the writing assignment. Most likely, you will have encountered unexpected challenges, which you are encouraged to describe. We will also discuss the sample pieces I will have distributed the previous Friday. You will be expected to offer constructive criticism about how the stories could be improved. We should have additional time for any topics that students wish to discuss further.

All participants in the second session (including waiting list students) are required to write a 100-word critique of each article we will be discussing. The critique should describe a strong point of the article, and suggest a way to improve it. This assignment is intended to sharpen our discussion. Please bring two printed copies of your critiques: one for me and one for the author. Print each critique on a separate piece of paper.
I will return evaluated writing assignments at the second meeting.

Updates:
I will email all participants any updates and add them to this page.

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